paradise found (original music + poetry)

dedicated to chickiesgretagirl x

this is an old tune i recorded with a friend a few years back, i twiddled with it a bit and added a couple of my poems from about ten years ago..
i’ve still got no camera, so it’s magix effects again i’m afraid lol

Play it LOUD with the screen on BIGGYVISION

song
CAN’T BE LONELY

tonite tonite
just make it right
sing a song of light

y’know the day will come
when all is done
fly to the other side

can’t be lonely
keep feeding the hole inside
can’t be lonely
feel the sun rise into your eyes

no need to hide
we’re on your side
come and lay down here

one day you’ll find
a time to shine
y’know the day is near

can’t be lonely
keep feeding the hole inside etc

vocals by Loesha Stoutenbeek
all instruments by yellowcatz
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poems
PARADISE FOUND

where does the voice of man begin
does it grow within the heart?
or maybe in the soul of man
surely that must be the start?

or is it something deeper
with it’s roots spread all around?
or has man forged a tomb for it
lay deep within the ground?

and will we ever hear again
that voice long dulled by time?
a sound so pure and distant
locked deep within our mind

and can we ever open
the bolts that hold it fast?
and step inside to listen
to the music of the past?

i fear one day that maybe
man will construct a wall
to outlaw such devotion
and dull the hallowed call

but if the heart is open
the stone will fall away
and there is found
the sacred sound
of the soul
that lost
it’s way

SO CLOSE
(call of the siren)

sun rays cut thru the cold day
sweet thoughts inside my head
last night i asked if you would stay
you called to me and said..

“I’d like to stay here with you
and hold you thru the night
make love and talk of wondrous things
until the morning light

i long to feel your warm breath
upon my eager breast
i long to feel the warm light
the heat of your caress

i long to kiss and hold you
to soothe your troubled mind
my heartbeat never misses
for you it beats in time

i long to take you places
no-one has been before
to fly up high above the sky
and walk the ocean floor

i long to wrap around you
the blanket of my soul
to keep you safe away from harm
away from hearts so cold

i long to give you all of me
and all that i possess
my mind and body
soul and dreams
your permanent address

i’d like to stay here with you
and hold you through the night
make love and talk of wondrous things
until the morning light

but sadly i can’t stay tonight
and your lips i’ll never kiss
for inside your mind i come alive
but outside i don’t exist”

Duration : 0:6:38


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25 Responses

  1. Vivid505 Says:

    wow… ive been …
    wow… ive been phathoming scapes along these waves. expanding out from the shells borne unto us. we creators, yahhh drop the stone! open heart…!!! tis the way. thanks for the encouragement. how a strangers poem reflects my own self transformation; spirit lion nourishment of zion. Many have found back our way!! babylon has taught that we are lost, but we can have whatever we find to create.

  2. fingercheese Says:

    Brilliant tune…. …
    Brilliant tune….Faved….all the star thingy’s…

  3. tjrinrok Says:

    The beat to this …
    The beat to this one is awesome. I like the female voice in it. I don’t like the lyrics that much though.

  4. cooles1 Says:

    “dedicated to …
    “dedicated to chickiesgretagirl x” i didn’t see this at first… sweet..so sweet! :)

  5. Yellowcatz Says:

    i’m with you mike.. …
    i’m with you mike…so many good people aiming for the same things but using different vehicles.. mine is music, words, and a three gear pushbike..let’s do it

  6. pbeachmike Says:

    i feel a wave of …
    i feel a wave of love and lately, i have been having more and more days where i can’t even touch the ground… i have seen the angels circling me in the dance of light as they pour out healing and filling my cup of love, that i in turn, pour over the world… we will not be distracted by the nonsense any longer…!!!
    this day we become love and i can say nothing more than i love you..

    I am Michael/pbeachmike and i approve this message. will you please join me in this quest…???

  7. YCoriginals Says:

    thanks townstra:))
    thanks townstra:))

  8. YCoriginals Says:

    cheers ingermusic:)
    cheers ingermusic:)

  9. bobpiquette Says:

    Great Song sounds …
    Great Song sounds great.
    The background very 007!!! Very nice.
    and poetry was great … great idea!!!

  10. slippereal Says:

    ha charlton heston! …
    ha charlton heston!!! i wish. “get your hands off me you dirty ape!”

  11. Yellowcatz Says:

    thanks justine:))
    thanks justine:))

  12. Yellowcatz Says:

    cheers mikey, loved …
    cheers mikey, loved your purpose pome, you sounded a bit like charlton heston, peace bro;))

  13. Emmisha Says:

    Hey Neale, yes I …
    Hey Neale, yes I did, merci, this is a beautiful production.

  14. SeekingJustine Says:

    Clever transition …
    Clever transition between Paradise Found and Paradise Lost. Love the twist in the end.

  15. slippereal Says:

    hey there you are …
    hey there you are man! cool to see you neale this is cool man! rock on bro love your art dude….

  16. YCoriginals Says:

    hi Jess, yea, i …
    hi Jess, yea, i think we’ve got similar tastes bro, cheers:)

  17. YCoriginals Says:

    my pleasure …
    my pleasure adnauseam, cheers:)

  18. YCoriginals Says:

    hi Emm, did you get …
    hi Emm, did you get the vid i sent? some things are not working my end, glad you liked it:))

  19. YCoriginals Says:

    thankyou …
    thankyou paisleypower:))

  20. YCoriginals Says:

    yea i know what you …
    yea i know what you mean bobzio, i tried to make a melancholic coating with a uplifting centre (or is it the other way round?!)
    anyway, happy you liked it luvvie x

  21. YCoriginals Says:

    thankyou quetzie, …
    thankyou quetzie, happy that it touched you, your encouragement is much appreciated:))

  22. YCoriginals Says:

    it’s not my …
    it’s not my strongest point but i enjoy it, cheers bigeezy:))

  23. YCoriginals Says:

    spaghetti western …
    spaghetti western dub maybe?!! lol
    cheers dudean:)

  24. YCoriginals Says:

    cheers visionary …
    cheers visionary one :)

  25. YCoriginals Says:

    hi elvira, thanks:))
    hi elvira, thanks:))

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